Comments on: Love, Death and Doughnut Holes http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=370 Online Fiction Magazine Sat, 07 Aug 2010 01:06:19 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.6 hourly 1 By: Terry Ervin II http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=370&cpage=1#comment-663 Terry Ervin II Sun, 06 Sep 2009 03:03:34 +0000 http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=370#comment-663 Really got a kick out of the story. It was fun. The line that kept me reading was: "He painted the trim turquoise, put some pink flamingos and garden gnomes in the flower bed out front, and really made it into something classy." Yep, definately classy. Oh, and I learned never to give free doughnut holes to an overly hairy fellow. Great and creative story, Stephanie Scarborough! Really got a kick out of the story. It was fun. The line that kept me reading was: “He painted the trim turquoise, put some pink flamingos and garden gnomes in the flower bed out front, and really made it into something classy.”

Yep, definately classy. Oh, and I learned never to give free doughnut holes to an overly hairy fellow.

Great and creative story, Stephanie Scarborough!

]]> By: Mike http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=370&cpage=1#comment-662 Mike Mon, 24 Aug 2009 18:43:24 +0000 http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=370#comment-662 Not my typical read, but you've got some really great lines in here that kept me hooked. Not my typical read, but you’ve got some really great lines in here that kept me hooked.

]]> By: Kerk http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=370&cpage=1#comment-653 Kerk Sat, 08 Aug 2009 17:05:04 +0000 http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=370#comment-653 Fantastic work. It really is. Everything was very well put together. It was definitely very funny, and you really broke away from the norm with it. The characters were so much more interesting and original than what you usually see. Fantastic work. It really is. Everything was very well put together. It was definitely very funny, and you really broke away from the norm with it. The characters were so much more interesting and original than what you usually see.

]]> By: Mannyr http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=370&cpage=1#comment-629 Mannyr Wed, 29 Jul 2009 14:16:47 +0000 http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=370#comment-629 Well done, great pace. I liked the characterization. Just the right amount of conflict. send more. Well done, great pace. I liked the characterization. Just the right amount of conflict. send more.

]]> By: Greg Schwartz http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=370&cpage=1#comment-603 Greg Schwartz Thu, 23 Jul 2009 01:19:35 +0000 http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=370#comment-603 haven't had time to read the story yet, but i love that title! haven’t had time to read the story yet, but i love that title!

]]> By: Saturday Morning Stories « http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=370&cpage=1#comment-585 Saturday Morning Stories « Sat, 18 Jul 2009 14:26:03 +0000 http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=370#comment-585 [...] 18, 2009 · Leave a Comment You can read my story “Love, Death and Doughnut Holes” online at A Fly in [...] [...] 18, 2009 · Leave a Comment You can read my story “Love, Death and Doughnut Holes” online at A Fly in [...]

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