http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=374 Online Fiction Magazine Sat, 07 Aug 2010 01:06:19 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.6 hourly 1 http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=374&cpage=1#comment-720 Clare Deming Fri, 09 Oct 2009 14:20:40 +0000 http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=374#comment-720 Thank you very much for the kind comments and for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed my tale! Thank you very much for the kind comments and for reading. I’m glad you enjoyed my tale!

]]> http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=374&cpage=1#comment-635 Mike Morris Sat, 01 Aug 2009 02:03:13 +0000 http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=374#comment-635 Very smooth style. This is an excellent story. It was a good idea to focus on the gentle giant. I like the way that the stupid, though inoffensive lemkins achieved a small dose of wisdom. Very smooth style. This is an excellent story. It was a good idea to focus on the gentle giant. I like the way that the stupid, though inoffensive lemkins achieved a small dose of wisdom.

]]> http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=374&cpage=1#comment-634 Mike Morris Sat, 01 Aug 2009 01:59:47 +0000 http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=374#comment-634 Very smooth style. This is an excellent story. Very smooth style. This is an excellent story.

]]> http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=374&cpage=1#comment-584 Chris Cosby Sat, 18 Jul 2009 06:34:14 +0000 http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=374#comment-584 Excellent story. It reminds me of the themes that Native American stories have. The rythme is very fluent and easy to read. The responses of Krinak really cause me to think in the terms of Native Americans. The dialoge between him and the Lemkin's being simple and direct. Excellent story. It reminds me of the themes that Native American stories have. The rythme is very fluent and easy to read. The responses of Krinak really cause me to think in the terms of Native Americans. The dialoge between him and the Lemkin’s being simple and direct.

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