Comments on: Rites of Passage http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=431 Online Fiction Magazine Sat, 07 Aug 2010 01:06:19 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.6 hourly 1 By: Morva Shepley http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=431&cpage=1#comment-620 Morva Shepley Sun, 26 Jul 2009 04:06:03 +0000 http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=431#comment-620 Hi Ripley, I enjoyed "Rites of Passage". I like the way you convey so many kinds of rites of passage in such a small story. I wonder if she gets a different kind of magic in exchange for the betrayal of the little ones, or whether a normal womanhood is it for her now. Anyway, I enjoyed the story and I've put a link to it at Morva House. Cheers Morva Shepley. Hi Ripley,

I enjoyed “Rites of Passage”. I like the way you convey so many kinds of rites of passage in such a small story. I wonder if she gets a different kind of magic in exchange for the betrayal of the little ones, or whether a normal womanhood is it for her now.

Anyway, I enjoyed the story and I’ve put a link to it at Morva House.

Cheers
Morva Shepley.

]]> By: Pat Whitaker http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=431&cpage=1#comment-619 Pat Whitaker Sat, 25 Jul 2009 19:56:36 +0000 http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=431#comment-619 A beautifully crafted and evocative tale, and a truly original slant on the passage tyo maturity. A beautifully crafted and evocative tale, and a truly original slant on the passage tyo maturity.

]]> By: Greg Schwartz http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=431&cpage=1#comment-604 Greg Schwartz Thu, 23 Jul 2009 01:23:18 +0000 http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=431#comment-604 nice one! good description. nice one! good description.

]]> By: Cassie http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=431&cpage=1#comment-602 Cassie Wed, 22 Jul 2009 20:37:18 +0000 http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=431#comment-602 What a great story! Beautiful What a great story! Beautiful

]]> By: Angel Leigh McCoy http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=431&cpage=1#comment-599 Angel Leigh McCoy Tue, 21 Jul 2009 21:01:54 +0000 http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=431#comment-599 I love this story. The characters are so alive, and I love how it ends. I love the unembarrassed sensuality/sexuality of it. I love this story. The characters are so alive, and I love how it ends. I love the unembarrassed sensuality/sexuality of it.

]]> By: Annie K http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=431&cpage=1#comment-591 Annie K Mon, 20 Jul 2009 03:41:17 +0000 http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=431#comment-591 This is a great story, with immediacy, intimacy, and vivid characterization. Ominous undertones extend the life of the story beyond the page. This is a great story, with immediacy, intimacy, and vivid characterization. Ominous undertones extend the life of the story beyond the page.

]]> By: Kam Oi Lee http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=431&cpage=1#comment-590 Kam Oi Lee Mon, 20 Jul 2009 01:57:25 +0000 http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=431#comment-590 Great story! Very physical, and richly symbolic. Great story! Very physical, and richly symbolic.

]]> By: Virginia M. Mohlere http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=431&cpage=1#comment-588 Virginia M. Mohlere Sun, 19 Jul 2009 22:57:20 +0000 http://www.aflyinamber.net/?p=431#comment-588 Lovely! Lovely!

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